Penname: Telwoman [Contact]
Real name: Lorna Elsewint
Member Since: 21/02/2011
Membership status: Member
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Et Excrucior by Dirty_Rose Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Dorian thinks about his troubled realtionship with Klaus...

Inspired by the poem "Catullus 85"
Characters: Dorian, Klaus
Genres: Drama, Established Relationship, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 864 Read Count: 4717
[Report This] Published: 25/04/2011 Updated: 25/04/2011
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 26/04/2011 | Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

> a kiss that ... already had a bitter taste of emptiness

What a wonderful line!  Thank you for this story. I love the way you've written Klaus, becoming his true self by night and closing himself off by day. Please post more of your stories!
best, Lorna (TelWoman)



Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it! It was my first post and I was really hoping for a review :-) Yes, I\'m planning to write more soon.\r\n Thank you for your comment!

Summary:

And the two found themselves on a train again...

WIP
Characters: Dorian, Klaus, Z
Genres: Drama, First Time, General, Romance
Warnings: character death
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5803 Read Count: 50656
[Report This] Published: 07/05/2011 Updated: 26/02/2012
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 07/05/2011 | Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

... and now anything could happen! I like your careful, detailed style, making the reader look at each small detail. It adds to the sense of Dorian being stuck in enforced stillness on the train. This piece would make a great opening for a story. I'd love to know what happens next! (Do you think you will write more and tell us?)

Author's Response: More will follow, I assure. Though there will be a gap before the next instalment. This is due to the fact that I am slow.

Summary: The Major has an unexpected and unwelcome visitor. And no, it's not Eroica.
Characters: Klaus, Tyrian
Genres: Humor, Short
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 913 Read Count: 4157
[Report This] Published: 03/03/2013 Updated: 03/03/2013
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 03/03/2013 | Title: Chapter 1: Ghosts of ages past

I love what you've done with this. You've taken that original piece of silliness and given it shape and direction.

And there's always room for more Tyrian! <3

The Unkindest Cut by Nomad Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Klaus suffers at the hands of the KGB
Characters: A, Dorian, G, Klaus
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2894 Read Count: 3937
[Report This] Published: 03/03/2013 Updated: 03/03/2013
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 03/03/2013 | Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the way you play with the reader, who is thinking: oh no! Klaus has been tortured! Carved up! Disfigured! ... and then it turns out they've hacked off his hair. Which probably counts as 'disfigured' to Dorian.

Author's Response: Dorian gets very miffed at other people altering his favourite works of art without permission.  Those KGB agents should probably watch their backs for a while.

Not the Only Fruit by Nomad Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Klaus has an unwanted revelation.
Characters: Dorian, Klaus, Z
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: Not the Only Fruit
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2708 Read Count: 3459
[Report This] Published: 02/07/2013 Updated: 02/07/2013
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 02/07/2013 | Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully told. Klaus's detailed consideration of Z's charms, and his horror at allowing himself to drift into looking, are detailed so beautifully. His final act of denial, shoving Dorian out into the corridor, is so *Klaus*! I love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to write a sequel or two at some point, though I'm busy with other projects at the moment; I feel like there's more to be told now that Klaus has this new revelation to deal with.

Chat Room by Aireira Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Dorian is an effective cock-blocker, isn't he?
Characters: Dorian, Klaus, Z
Genres: Crack, Humor, Romance, Short
Warnings: None
Series: Eroica Drabbles - Volume I
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 605 Read Count: 2542
[Report This] Published: 02/06/2018 Updated: 18/09/2018
Reviewer: Telwoman (Signed)
Date: 21/09/2018 | Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so much fun! Made me laugh. Klaus's "voice" is so very ... so very Klaus.

Author's Response: Heheheh... thank you!~ >;)