Wauw what a totally fantastic story! The plot was really amazing. There was just so many good things I don't even know where to start. I had so many moments of utter joy and something like 'the world starting up again for Klaus when Dorian truly smiles' - sighs.... And the way that you end it, just slightly rewritten from the starting paragraph, but what an improvement :-)
Thank you so much for writing this, it was absolutely beautiful.