Wauw what a totally fantastic story! The plot was really amazing. There was just so many good things I don't even know where to start. I had so many moments of utter joy and something like 'the world starting up again for Klaus when Dorian truly smiles' - sighs.... And the way that you end it, just slightly rewritten from the starting paragraph, but what an improvement :-)
Thank you so much for writing this, it was absolutely beautiful.
I absolutely loved this...I cried...This is so wonderful! So full of twists and turns...It kept you guessing! Love it!
Oh my, that was so incredibly plotty! I read it in one go; I just couldn't put it away! So captivating. Bravo!
Ummm, what the hell just happened? The Major's still a major? Well, that explains why the Alphabet's military IDs were still valid......
Oh! I love it such a good story. Of course I like the boys in bed but not unless there is a good story. This was a great story and I loved it so very much. Thank you. Which is your latest story if you don't mind telling. Thank you again.
Carol
Oh! I love it such a good story. Of course I like the boys in bed but not unless there is a good story. This was a great story and I loved it so very much. Thank you.
Carol
... *love* .... *lovelovelove* *lovelove* *love*
If I fully explained how awesome this story was-- or how desperately I needed such an awesome story right now-- the length of this review could very well rival that of the fic itself. So: *love* *lovelovelovelovelove* *love!*
Thank you for taking the time to leave even this "edited" review. ;-D It makes the research, edits, re-writes, arguments with betas, and struggles in general all worth it.
...This is... compelling as hell. And keeping me up way too late. But good lord, I don't mind, because something about Badass!extracloset!Rogue-agent!Klaus is just awesome beyond belief. And the intrigue is so very, very intriguing. In short? Sheer adoration.
That was a rollercoaster. The first couple of chapters.. I have never hated or wanted to hurt the Earl before but that was too cruel! The story was amazingly complex and detailed and I was HOPING that was how it would end! It's taken me a couple of hours to read it straight through and I couldn't have imagined stopping until the end.
Just wow.
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the ride.
[!!!] You've done it this time, you really have. It's the fact that I would pay to read this fabulously, genius work of art.
"He went on to had the General a large envelope, " - should that be 'hand'? I think there also, maybe, have been another spelling accident in an earlier chapter but I can't recall, (guess I'll just have to read it again). In my opinion this should be considered an option for the actual ending in the book. Please, oh please, keep writing Eroica fanfiction! <3
Author's Response: How very kind of you to say so. I love complex plots. No worries about my continuing to write. All I need is a good plot that I can sink my teeth into.