Reviews For Cinnamon Toast
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Reviewer: Aireira (Signed) [Report This]
Date: 20/10/2018 17:45 | Title: Cinnamon Toast

I love fluffy lemons. This is so in character, too!

Reviewer: Girling (Signed) [Report This]
Date: 28/04/2011 09:53 | Title: Cinnamon Toast

This is one of the finest stories I've read for a long time, if not the finest I've ever read. I'm a fan of your writing, and you show great talent, a mature writing style and very vivid, attractive imagery within your fiction.

You reveal very little about the events surrounding the situation, but immediately set scenes well, with an unconventional, yet believable scenario, with many unpredictable outcomes.r32;
The dialogue is very fluid and realistic, based on the two characters and the conversation doesn’t seem awkward and cliche as it does in many other stories I’ve read. The Klaus and Dorian in your story seem almost the same as the Klaus and Dorian written by Yasuko Aoike. r32;

Your writing as well as being suitably easy to read and a pleasure to follow, is also very erotic, with slight movements being described with an exquisite passion, that can rarely be matched.

All in all, I think you can tell that I am very impressed by your writings. I really hope to hear more of your “food fantasies” series.

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