Lovely. Although for a moment there I though Dorian knew what he was doing to the Major. He really didn't?
Date: 05/10/2011 22:20 | Title: 99
Date: 12/02/2008 12:58 | Title: 99
What a delightful tease. You grasp the tone and style of the manga so well, and I love your attention to clothing detail and to the specific subject of sex and food. I can picture every moment, and it feels so much like a chapter from the original! I also love that you dispense with any details about the mission; as you seem to rightly imply: who cares (they're all the same and let's get to the seduction/flirtation/outrage)! Since no good review should be without constructive criticism, I merely query on the use of Farenheit vs. Celsius in England for describing the temperature. Thank you for a delightful little tease!
Date: 26/06/2006 11:18 | Title: 99
That was cute.
Date: 20/03/2006 10:32 | Title: 99
Simply wonderful. I adore these kind of fics... so sensual and yet so... innocent, yanno? Lovely. Mmm. The Major + Eroica = One True Pair. ^^