I remember reading this on your LJ - a short while ago. I really like it! It's not fair of anyone to think that Dorian is a weakling cuz... well, he isn't and we've seen enough proof of that throughout the series :)

And Klaus has seen this, too, and recogncizes him as a pro - more than once... (We know you want him, Klaus!)

Well done!

PS: I do hop you continue your other story someday :)